Tuesday, September 28, 2010

"Particles & Waves" (stage 3)


These pages began as a story for the next issue of Faesthetic, #13. The results displeased me, so...
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  1. I'm intrigued that you were able to arrange the charred fragments so precisely. It's as if you've put the pieces of a jigsaw puzzle in their correct places.

    There's plenty of visual rhyming, repetition of elements, going on.

    & btw, apparently Tolkien made a manuscript then burnt it, to work out how much of the Dwarves' book in the mines of Moria would be legible.

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  4. Thanks all.

    I feel the first page is more successful... panels 3 and 4 on page two bother me, the imagery is a bit too clear.

    I should also say (somewhat guiltily) that I think most of my work in this style is more "design" than comics -- it's definitely meant to be looked at all at once rather than panel-to-panel.

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  5. Excellent! I would say most people would have a hard time putting something together such as this. It does not seem easy by any means. Great work!

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