Abstract Sonnet 3

First Quatrain

Here is the final tier of my newest comic.  I put the whole page up to give you the full context.  I think it works much better than the "gag strip" versions I post. 

Tier 3

Tier 2

I hesitated to post this comic bit by bit.  At first I was going to post yesterday's little section and then post the full final version. 

Then i thought they looked kind of like abstract comics gag-a-day strips.

Anybody wanna remix these with Peanuts dialog?

The Beginning of Something New

I am trying my hand at comics sonnets again.  My original comics sonnets were fourteen pages long with ten panels per page.  This was fun to play with, but made the comics seem more epic than the original sonnet that they mimicked.

For this round of comics sonnets, I am sticking with fourteen rows of panels instead of pages, which will make the poem shorter.  I also think it will be easier to see the visual rhyming sequence this way.

Here's the first tier of panels:

More to come. . .